Great plot with simplistic graphics but great snow
Put, simply, I like it. Will there be another one?
A little too simple...
The writeing was awesome, but the comic timeing was off. The animation didn't aid the jokes and was over simplisitic (not enough details), but mainly a lot of jokes didn't play do to bad comic timing which could have been fixed by the animator. But, GREAT WRITEING.
Awesome! Very fluid.
That was awesome. I respect you. Funny as hell.
GREAT VIDEO but your link doesn't work
WOW! Finally a fan film that doesn't suck! GREAT JOB! The only complaints I have is that you need better microphones for your audio. It sounds hallow and echoe in the bad way. Try recording with a cheap zoom boom or short shotgun (like a MKE-300) and do it eithor in a deep closet with lots of cloths or a blanket covered wall room of some kind. You need to ditch that echoe man. Deaden it. Mind you that's a video mic I listed, but that's all I know, video and how to get decent audio on it. I do my flash voices on mini-DV tape and firewire capture the clips then convert them to wav. Your voice acting is good, just it's suffering from a bad recording.
But seriously, I'll give you a 10 that was well executed.
In reponse Sunday is the sabbath to some denoms.
The sabbath is Sunday, depending on which denomination you are under. Some crazier Xtains (haha I X'ed over Christ) beleive it's on Saterday they are the ones usually annoying you at your doorstep every week end with the "good word". And yes they punished people for breaking the sabbath, expecially back in the day. Only in these more enlightened times do we not do it. Which is good, in fact it even as soon as the mid 1800's people were imprisoned and tortured for breaking it. Of course those who deney this are usaully the same people who deney the inquisition. So Fuck'em.
William A. McDonald
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